Friday 11 September 2009

A new life has begun

(the bad english)
To finish the MA study means that you are having a lot of free time, and then you will have more chance to explore the real society, to join different clubs, to know more friends.

Also, it will let you think about what are you going to do next , you will start a new life plan, it's exciting, isn't it?

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(the right english)
Finishing the MA programme means that you have a lot of free time, and you will have more chances to explore the real society, to join different clubs, to know more friends.
Also, it will give you space to think about what you are going to do next; you will start a new life plan. It's exciting, isn't it?

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